David Garfinkels Method for Critiquing Copywriting

Aug
16
2011

This method is to be used when you are critiquing any sales copy piece.

4 Phases —————–

1. Know your customers. What do they want, their fears, their hopes, dreams and desires and what they have to hear from you. Zero in.

2. Know the 7 reasons why people buy

3. The Positive Sales Letter track

4. The Negative Sales Letter track

A. The Prospect –

1. Who are they?

2. What’s on their mind?

3. What’s their main desire?

4. How do they talk about their desires? How do they think about it?

B. The 7 Reasons People Buy

1. Make money

2. Save money

3. Save time

4. Save effort

5. Increase pleasure

6. Reduce pain

7. Increase health

Positive Sale Letter Track

C. The Positive Sales Letter Track (A and B)

1. Make a claim

2. Prove it

3. Ask for action

4. Leave everything else out.

D. Negative Sales Letter Track

These address the negative voice in every prospects mind as they read your copy.

1. Why are you bothering me?

2. Who cares?

3. Why should I believe you?

4. Why now?

How To Use It

1. Most people focus on what they’re selling. Forget about it. Rather think about the prospect – who they are and what problems you’re solving for them. .

2. Figure out which of the 7 reasons the prospect might use to solve their problem? Save time? Make money? Save money? Etc. etc. etc. Don’t assume customer know the benefits.

3. Make a claim! Prove it! Ask for Action and leave everything else out.

4. Address the negative sales track. Answer the 4 question.

How To Integrate Aweber with PayPal

Feb
17
2011

Many people use PayPal as their primary means of e-commerce. PayPal is free and is pretty flexible. PayPal unlike other services such as 1Shopping Cart does not include an integrated auto responder service which means if you don’t integrate the two, that when someone buys from you using PayPal that their email address will not be captured as part of an Aweber auto responder. Integrating the two means that when someone buys from that that they’ll be added to your auto responder. The result is that you’ll have a segregated Aweber auto responder that will allow you to send targeted email to ‘customers only’.

You can download written instructions to go along with this video if needed.

How To Integrate Aweber with PayPal

List Automation and Other Details

Nov
05
2010

Segmenting  Your List and More Form Tweaking

This video will teach you how to trick out your form with a graphic (if you have a really boring form) and also how to segment your list using the Aweber automation function.

Segmenting your list is a key technique to learn because you’ll be able to market to your back end (customers) and your prospects in a way that is appropriate and as mentioned earlier, it is easier to sell to an existing customer then it is to acquire a new customer.

Aweber Forms Video 2

Nov
04
2010

Setting Up Your 2nd Form and  Your Split Test

This video will demonstrate the simple system for copying an existing form to create your split test form, how to get the split test code for your website, how to put the code on your website and then how to make modifications and tweak the display to your liking.

Creating an Opt In Form Video 1

Nov
04
2010

This video is the first in  a series of creating and opt in form. When creating an opt in form you’ll always want to create two to start with so you can split test which is the subject of the next video. This video will just cover the basics of form creation and some of the options that Aweber enables for creating a basic form, adding fields and basic form decoration.

Next video – Opt In Form Video 2 – More on forms, split testing and adding the form to your website.

Leave any questions, or comments below and someone will reply in 24 hours, or less.

Aweber, Writing a Follow Up Message

Nov
04
2010

In this video we’ll review the previous territory regarding list setup and then dive right into writing a follow up message. Aweber gives you two options for messages

  1. HTML
  2. Plain Text

Always create an HTML and Plain Text message because some people receive their email in plan text still.

Next Video: Creating an Opt In Form

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Writing A Press Release

Nov
03
2010

How To Write a Press Release

Having worked as a journalist for a major metropolitan newspaper for 23 years, I waded through my share of press releases — good, bad and horrible.

Before I get into the fine points of crafting a press release, there are probably a few things you ought to know about the news business.

Reporters and editors in the traditional media get dozens, sometimes hundreds of press releases in a week. About five percent of those may get serious attention for consideration as a story or news blurb. About one percent may ever get written up.

Reporters are no more or less industrious than anyone else. If there’s an easier way to do something, they’ll probably do it. So your job is to make their job as easy as possible. In effect, you need to tell them what the story is and give them everything they need to write it.

Their attitude is typically “we’re doing you a favor by telling your story.” At the same time, because they receive so much crap, they are pleasantly surprised and appreciative when they receive an interesting and well-written press release.

Now the expectations are somewhat less for online PR services. They’ll take anything and post it and someone might read it. But the same basic principles will still apply. You have to present an appealing story for it to have any legs and for others to want to pick up that story.

As someone deciding whether a story is worth the space, here’s what I want to see.

Is there and interesting and newsworthy angle? Just because your Aunt Millie played a bit part in your zombie movie is not cause for a press release, unless Aunt Millie is Milla Jovovich. Think about what is really interesting about your movie, then run that by a few people and see what they say. Maybe it’s a tale of overcoming great obstacles to make the movie, or the unique plot, or the fact you were a pipe-fitter before you became a director.

If your first approach is to the local newspaper, you might want to emphasize any local connection, from the writer/director, to locations, to actors.

Some reasons for issuing a press release:

1) the movie is about to premiere in theatrical or online release

2) it’s been accepted into a film festival, Sundance we hope

3) you’ve got a star whose name will be recognized

4) a local connection

But the basic question to ask yourself is, why would anyone care? If you can’t find a good answer to that, don’t even start the press release.

This is the lead of your press release. It might be all they read, so do it well.

Secondly, it’s not nice to tease the reporters. Your press release should have all the information they need to complete a story, or at worst, contact information so they can find it. They are usually on deadline and the fewer rabbit holes they have to go down, the better.

This means a clear statement of the five Ws somewhere in the press release, perhaps as a sub-headline — the who, what, when, where and, why (or how) if necessary. “Attack of the KIller Wombats,” starring Bat Masterson, premieres Thursday, Aug. 19, 2012 at the Indie Cinema, 2025 W. 98th Street, Poleaxe, North Dakota.”

Include a concise description of your movie, in the second or third graph, which can be expanded upon later. But you should have a great logline by the time your movie is released. Use it.

Include links to your movie trailer online and your movie webpage which will be filled with interesting information about the production and distribution of the film — right?

At the end of your press release, include your contact information including phone number and email. Also include the names and contact information of the anyone else you’d like to do an interview, including the writer, director, producer or lead actors. Phone numbers are preferred. Make sure you note that this contact information is for the use of the writer only and not to be reprinted anywhere.

Spell check, dammit. Bad writing is one thing. Bad spelling is preventable.

Mention your movie website in the press release.

If you’re specifically targeting a movie reviewer, let them know the movie is available on your Maxcast account. That helps you by giving them instant access, and prevents their 12-year-old son from burning a copy and bootlegging it in China.

(You might want to wait for the review, however. Your goal here is to get the good word out about the movie before it premieres. If it’s good and a reviewer says so, great. But a bad review before the premiere can kill the interest.)

Include movie stills if you’re sending a hard copy press kit, or make digital photos of at least 300 DPI available from your website. The resolution can be less for online reproduction. Editors love photos they don’t have to assign, and your story could get you placement over an equally compelling story that has no artwork. (For TV, it’s a little different ball game. They want visuals to go with the story, so be prepared to give them something visual if they should call. You’re a visual artist. Think like one.)

Have someone who doesn’t know a thing about your movie read the press release before you send it off. We tend to take things for granted that we are familiar with and can easily forget to provide basic information.

Do some targeting of the reporters. Find out who covers movies for that particular daily newspaper, alternative weekly, TV station, website or blog and make sure they and their boss get a copy of the press release.

Actually, to prime the pump, you might call before you send the press release. Contact the target by phone if possibly, and Innocently inquire about whether they are the right person to send the press release to. Don’t sell it, just plant the seed. If the reporter is bored, he or she might even chat you up to find out more information.

The sweet spot for press releases for traditional media is 2-4 weeks prior to publication. This gives them time to do a story, but it’s not so long that they forget about it. Online releases are instantaneous, but still give them a couple of weeks notice before something like a premiere.

You may follow up 3-5 working days later with a phone call or email to the reporter or editor to see if they received the press release and if there is any other information they need. Be prepared to do an interview at any time. Then cross your fingers.

Download Sample Press Release

Download  Sample Press Release MS Word for Windows (use for template)

Aweber, Setting Up Your List

Nov
03
2010

This is the first video dealing with the basic functional steps necessary to configure your Aweber auto responder. In this video you’ll learn how to define and configure your list. You’ll also learn about double opt-in and when you can and should use the double opt-in technique and when you don’t need and shouldn’t use the double opt-in feature.

Building a Tribe Video 1, Aweber Auto Responder

Nov
02
2010

If I had to enumerate one essential skill and service you must have for long term success in the internet marketing world it would be an Auto Responder. Long term success means building a tribe of followers. Followers who like what you do, buy your stuff and want to keep up to date and informed about what you’re doing.

This video will give you a high level overview of the value and benefits of Auto Responder technology.